Hi everyone! This week our writing goal was "Revise and rework writing for clarity, impact and purpose. proofread for spelling, grammar and punctuation". We had to watch a few videos about editing your writing and the difference between revising and editing your writing. Then for our Create Task/DLO (Digital Learning Object) we had to go back to our report that we were writing about a worthy and admirable New Zealander and edit our report based on a rubric and based on what we learnt when we watched the videos. Then we had to make a google drawing or slide with three things we thought were important when editing your report and three examples from your report.
Here is my slide (google drawing is already on the slide!): My slide:)
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Have you ever written a report before?
Hi Samantha
ReplyDeleteGreat writing work Samantha. I like how you have highlighted your corrections on your presentation. I always have to read my own writing out load to find mistakes. Keep the up the good work.
Steve